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S.W.A.T.
At the begging of the movie SWAT two people have to go in to a back and get ride of the two robbers inside the bank and free the hosteges one of the SWAT members that entered the bank throught the roof in an office shot the first guy in the torso and the second robber took a hosteg and held her close to his body so the SWAT officer could not get a clean shot so he had to shot the hostege in the sholder just to get at the last robber. Now I ask your opinion do you think it was a good idea to shot the hostege in the sholder just to get at the robber behind her. If so then give a reason why you would do that if not then tell me what you would do differently?
Zac--You need more attention to rhetoric in your entries. You have topics that are fine for discussion, but you don't provide much support or analysis, nor do you provide set up or sign off that really satisfies a reader. You need to not be so brief, and you need to think of how you can engage your audience.
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